Wednesday 22 September 2010

MAYBE YOU HAVE THE MAKINGS OF A SONGWRITER


Baby I like it
The way you move on the floor.
Baby I like it.
Come and give me some more.
Oh yes, I like it
Screaming like never before.

NOW, IT'S YOUR TURN. CAN YOU CHANGE THE CHORUS?
This is my proposal:
Baby I like it.
Eating and drinking with you
Baby I like it.
Staying in bed until two.
Oh yes, I like it.
Reading my favourite book.

NOT VERY GOOD, ISN'T IT?
WHEN YOU WRITE YOURS, PAY ATTENTIO TO THE RHYME.

10 comments:

Daniela A. Ayala Molinari said...

Hi!! I used to do the same with my students, but in a lower level, of course ;).
Have a nice week :P
Daniela.

Pilar Bravo said...

Hi !!!!

I think that your proposal is good,teacher!
My proposal is a bit enough diferent and maybe, it hasn´t got a lot of sense! But I hope you like it!!
Is this:

Baby I like it
Watch as you close the door
Baby I like it
You've always been the core
Oh yes I like it
Acting like a real acto
Baby I like it.

Pilar Bravo said...

Hi !!!!

I think that your proposal is good,teacher!
My proposal is a bit enough diferent and maybe, it hasn´t got a lot of sense! But I hope you like it!!
Is this:

Baby I like it
Watch as you close the door
Baby I like it
You've always been the core
Oh yes I like it
Acting like a real actor
Baby I like it.

ana the teacher said...

Pilar... or should I say Beyonce??? You are not just good at dancing but I see that you are also an excellent songwriter... Congrats!!!

Ana Maria said...

Hi! My proposal is this though it doesn´t rhyme completely.
Yours teacher is much better and that of Pilar also.
Is this:

Baby I like it
When you say nothing at all,
Baby I like it
You speak with smiles and looks
Oh yes I like it
Don´t say at all love
Baby I like it

Marta Navas said...

hello teacher¡
I tried to do, I hope that rhymes
this is my proposal:

Baby I like it
when we go in the car
Baby I like it
while trying to relax
Oh yes I like it
where are my real

Lucía Marín said...

Hello teacher,I don´t know if it will be made well. I hope you like it.

Baby I like it
When you are singing my song
Baby I like it
Your smile makes me feel strong
Oh yes,I like it
Dancing,please never stop
Baby I like it...

ana the teacher said...

Wooooooooouuuuuu!!!! I'm really impressed!!! That's fantastic!!!

Patricia Garcia-Cid said...

Hi teacher!!
I think that your proposal is very interesting and this is mi proposal, What do you think?

Baby I like it.
When you smile.
Baby I like it.
Dancing for hours.
Oh yes, I like it.
Because you're the best
Baby I like it

ana the teacher said...

Hey, Patricia!!! Good attempt; I really like it but if you try to sing it you'll realise you'll need some more words... Anyway, you deserve some stars

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